Captivated by You | BL

I legitimately just couldn't even finish the trial read due to how bad this novel is. The system feels fine, but everything else about the world and characters feels wrong. Things just don't play out how they should and there's an obsession with face slapping boring characters in uninteresting ways. Teachers are actualyl fine tho for some reason, they are actually pretty good.

As long as this is not a harem novel or full plot armour MC then this would be a promising comedy novel.Most often than not, the novel descriptions rarely tell wether the novel good or not but i will vote this because we need more comedy.

Love the story and want to read after 40! Please don't let this story not get picked! I'll literally cry if I can't read more! Alright, done, wait why do I need to have so many words?!

The plot and world building is fine. Generic but that isn't a bad thing. I would continue reading but with the MC's personality, it's too difficult. If you don't mind a protagonist with a horrible personality and character, then it is still worth reading. Protagonist is deceitful, dishonest, arrogant, violent, and delusional. He is worse than the typical "arrogant young master."

Do you have all broken talents from other novels together, one of then is more than enough to make any conflict become meaningless and the author have the brillant idea to mix them up

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